Who can help me with my poor composition??

    thanks a lot ! dear friends .

     you are all in here help me a lot.

      yes , i just need to try my best ,put my heart into learning english.and never give up!

      go for it!

On an immediate basis,you!

There is often no substitute for use and reading.

Reading gives a better sense of word order and

use,and helps get the tenses correct,and shows

what works and what doesn`t.

Use forces you to put your ideas,thoughts,and

dreams into the terms of the language being

learned.Language tends to color thought,so

let what is in your mind come to shape within

the forms of the language.

Learning another language is much like learning

a piece of music.Learn the song,dont`t fight it,

and once learned it can be sung to say what`s

on your heart!

In the longer term,everyone here can help you!

This is the practice of use with correction,without

condemnation or consequence that you are

needing!

Give it time.

Don`t work so hard at it that you get frustrated

and learn to hate it.

Finally,mistakes will teach you more than than

getting it right by luck!

Always take as much advantage of the

opportunity a good mistake offers,as is possible!

Best of luck,at sixteen you have plenty of time

to learn before you!

Slant Six