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Mumble and Jumble for soul !

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Saladeen

Saladeen

Pakistan

October 29, 2009


Moth fly!

Burning within flames-

Of passion.

Wind is blowing,

Giving much hope,

Flames to rise.

Moth fly; creature of madness-

Love to dance-

In the flames.  

 

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10:44 PM Nov 19 2009

Saladeen

Saladeen
Pakistan

Dialogue between Candle and Moth:

 

To give pain-

That's your Choice.

To sustain Pain-

That's my Choice.

You are adroit in yours.

I am adroit in mine.

The way you joy-

That's your playingfield.

The way I joy-

That's my playingfield.

What's your aim is my aim!

What's my aim is yours aim!

That's why we are true friends.

11:54 PM Oct 30 2009

Saladeen

Saladeen
Pakistan

Candle and Moth; both have same story:

Wick asked wax one day:

This query:

'Why you cry,

When i am on fire?

Wax reply:

How shall i not cry!

for one whom,

burn and fry;

for me-

In my love.

To whom,

i have given-

Place in my empire.

..........................................................

Candle (Wax and wick) and moth have such a madness, passion and love, for them, reasons don't have any meaning at all. That's why whenever both of them join a dance-party, they engage themselves to the degree of 'annihilation' and 'self-denial'.

For the world it is a madness, for them it is a life!

09:19 AM Oct 30 2009

CranBerry

CranBerry
Russian Federation

Why these two notions can be  together,

 fire and a moth?

 Maybe because the moth can  have its life

 as calm and comfortable as it should be..

 But every time it sees the flame of the candle moving in the wind,

 it  flies  to it as if being under  spells.

 The spells of love to dance and make her life

 As sparkling as a drop of crystal water, shining in the sun.

A wish to live in love, and keep that thing forever.

05:29 AM Oct 30 2009

Agnolia

Agnolia
Russian Federation

 a firefly itself is light only at night!

death is  a long waited reward  for a moth

after   the mad dancing rite

12:37 AM Oct 30 2009

Saladeen

Saladeen
Pakistan

Let introduce another dimension into moth metaphor.

Moth wants to die-

In the passion of light.

While firefly herself is light.

Although-

both share same family.

........................................

quite opposite!Smile

 

12:17 AM Oct 30 2009

Saladeen

Saladeen
Pakistan

For her(moth), the rest is death!

And for the sake of rest-

She is dancing!

11:18 PM Oct 29 2009

Agnolia

Agnolia
Russian Federation

I am afraid there is nothing more interesting than passion.    I just feel  a dancing moth needs some rest not to die from her passion  at the age of several hours.

03:47 AM Oct 29 2009

Saladeen

Saladeen
Pakistan

Is there something more interesting than passion itself! ...

 

03:20 AM Oct 29 2009

Agnolia

Agnolia
Russian Federation

 small ode to passion!

poor moth fly!   I feel she needs some rest to stop her mad dancing and looked around . she might be very lucky to see something interesting.....