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April 20, 2008
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Yesterday I went to donate my blood,after I got on the blood-collect bus ,the nurse glanced at me and then refused me."why?"I asked ,astonished."girl.you are too thin to have to donate 400cc blood at one time.I am afraid you are not able to complete the whole process but maybe you would get hurt .It's not a joke,my girl.I am just thinking in your perspective,you know."I was so disappointed that I was not allowed to risk donating my blood...what a pity!
(maybe I 've made many mistakes in my essey,if you point them out to me,I will be very grateful.thanks.If you have questions to ask me about my essey,please mail me.Let's make progress together!)
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john_zhang_q
Hi,buddy
I'm glad to find we have a same family name,Zhang,hehe...
Your description is spotless,but sorry,i have to point out a little fault,if i haven't guess wrong,the correct writing isn't essey but essay,and do you agree with me?
vivi_kan