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hi all,

it is a new task, but i am not sure how do you people accept it.

here i'm writing some sentences, my next will do correction (if any) so i can understand my mistakes, and i'll give a subject for my next to write, and my next also will give another subject for his next….

Hope you all understood and take it in a positive way.

here my words:

hi all, i'm Zealouz and i would like to share with you people about my hobbies. my first and favourite hobby is sleeping, i like more to sleep. and my 2nd hobby is watching TV, and my another hobby is makeFriendship. recently i started a new hobby that is browse EnglishBaby site.

the subject for my next friend is : "Please write about yourself"

before that, if there is any mistake in my words, please do correction.

Thank you All…

Zealouz.

Hmm.i don’t know whether im right,but I think u have some mistakes:

-I like to sleep more not “ I like to more sleep”

-my another hobby is to make friend

-recently,I’ve started…” 

im right or not,if im wrong tell me!(^^)Ok.Now I’ll say sothin’ abt my  hobby.hehe,.My favourite foods are sweet candy,chocolate,all kinds of biscuist.!!and I also like travelling,if I have a lot of money,definitely,I’ll go around the world bcozz I like to know abt different cultures. 

next subject: can u share something abtur life

Zaolouz may I try to show you some mistakes you did or must I only do it with what Lathy wrote?

hmmm, sharing something about my life, let me think.

Ok, so I'm an Algerian girl (plz don't say that you never heard about this beautiful country).I'm still studying at university, I will be be graduated this year and my major is Biology (quality control of food stuff and medecines), i think it's enough :D.

Next topic: what make you really happy in life?

First of all, Thanks both of you Lathy and DS.,

hey DS, i saw one mistake (i'm not sure) from you, that no need to say "I'm STILL Studying" you can say "I'm studying"

ok, now my turn again, what make me really happy in life..

Keep in touch with my Relatives and Friends make me happy in my life.

Next Topic: What you think about English..?

nobody here..?

You are welcome Zealouz, thanks for showing me my msitake but  i always use this sentence and noone told me  it's wrong , so please if you are sure tell me.

You said "and my another hobby is make friendship" i think it's more correct to say "i have another hobby which is making friends", i don't think that we can say "my another" may be "may other" (like you said I'm not sure).

"recently i started a new hobby that is " i think you should say " a new hobby which is".

In the past i hated English  because i had not a good level, so as a language i couldn't say that i like it and frankly i didn't want to learn  or improve it.But now, english is used in several areas ,thus, i haven't the choice i must keep improving my level if i want to succed in my studies and my futur professional life.

I can say that now i appreciate english more than befor cause  i did a huge progress( thanks .

Next topic: Why are you learning English?

(thanks God)

I learn Eng not only for my career in future but also for my hobby.Moreover,Eng is more and more popular nowadays, it’s has been using in many places in the world.And I think that It will be very backward if someone doesn’t know any basic Eng!(^^)!Next:Do u know anything abt Vietnam?!

I AM learnING Eng not only for my FUTURE career but also AS A hobby. Moreover, Eng is GETTING more and more popular nowadays, it IS USED in many places in the world. And I think that It WOULD be very backward if someone DIDN’T know (AT LEAST) SOME basic Eng! (or: ”...didn’t know any English”)
Now to your question,
Unfortunately, I don’t know a lot about Vietnam. I just know its location, which is somewhere in the South-East of Asia. If I’m correct, its capital is Hanoi. (I’m sorry if I misspelled it.) And a few years back, when I was making a list of “I love you” in all languages, for a Valentine card, I found the Vietnamese for “I love you” – “Anyuem” or something like that. :)))
And my question is:
What is one place in the world you’d like to visit and why, and what is that place that you would never go to and why?

hmm,Nad1a,i dont think i have mistake ,??!but anyway, thank u a lot!

Well lathy,
For the most part I suggested a better way to express yourself in this particular context, for which you may get a second (qualified) opinion. But then again, what tense would your English teacher call this: “it’s has been using”?