help with Chinese conversations?

Dear everyone:

I was wondering if anyone could help me with editing or correcting the following conversations I wrote in Mandarin Chinese? Any help would be greatly appreciated. 

Thank you in advance!

Al

Conversation 6 

你父母住哪里? Where do your parents live? 

我父母住沈阳。My parents live in Shenyang. 

他们喜欢沈阳吗?Do they like Shenyang? 

不太喜欢。Not that much. 

Conversation 7 

在北京外国人多吗?Are there many foreigners in Beijing?

 对, 外国人很多。That’s right, there’s a lot of foreigners. 

在香港也多吗?Are there also a lot in Hong Kong? 

对, 在香港也很多。That’s right, there’s also very many in Hong Kong.   

Conversation 8 

陈先生英语说得很好。Mr. Chen speaks English really well. 

是, 他住在加拿大三个年了。Yes, he lived in Canada for three years. 

我英语说得不太好。I don’t speak English very well. 

我也说得不太好。I also don’t speak it very well.  

 Conversation 9 

您会说中文吗?Can you speak Chinese? 

会, 我会说。Yes, I can speak it. 

您会写中文吗?Can you write Chinese? 

不会, 我不会写。No, I can’t. I can’t write it.  

Conversation 10

 这是你的护照吗?Is this your passport? 

不是, 是他的。No it isn’t, it’s his. 

你的护照在哪里?Where is your passport? 

在家。At home.

a) He lived in Cananda for three years.

他在加拿大三个年了.<-> 他(以前)在加拿大住过三年

b) He has lived in Canada for three years.

他在加拿大住了三年了．

三天，三个星期（三周）．三个月，三年

连喜  -> I owe you one! What can I do to help you?