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Hi, are there any potential poets? Let’s write together a poem about sad love…
I’ll start:
She’s crying, salt tears falling down on the ground,
So lonely she feels – now there’s noone around…
Feel easy to write any ideas!

So lonely she feels – now there’s noone around…>
People on the sidewalk – a potential love to talk..>

So lonely she feels – now there’s noone around…>
People on the sidewalk – a potential love to talk..>

Noone thinks about her So they think she has to be kicked

is that a way to treat or the damn way to be picked

Sorry, guys, my 1st line wasn’t shown at first – i’ve corrected it now; so let’s go on:
...She has to be strong to get over the pain,
But, heart bleeding on, all attempts are in vain…

she couldn't hold the pian .. or the sorrows and the blood Staind

she tried to kill herself Oh my god then tell me who should be blamed ..

THIS SOME WORDS I WROTE LIKE ROWS WHEN I HAVE SEEN THE SONG OF THE PROPHET MUHAMMAD HAD BEEN AS A POEM BY SAMI YUSUF's poem, CALLED IT AL-MU'ALLIM :

WE REALLY, IN FACT,

IT JUST TO BE, INDEED

SEE THE ARTS STAND,

BEGIN AN AGAIN, ON FEET

WHEN " HE WAS" ATTACTED ,

ATTAINED THE TOP OF  SHEETS 

" HE WAS ", CAME TO DO INFANT,

_ ARISE TO THE SOUL OF MEETS

THE LARCH STILL AN INTACT,

EVENIF, DROPPED ITS LEAVES

THAT AS THE SPRING IN BACK,

GREEN SHOUD BE, BACKS TO LEAVES .

SAMI YUSUF'S POEMS IS HERE :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dbIaetu85OM

Hekmer, i didn’t understand what you wrote about, really=¤

LIN, YOU HAVE NO A LINE WITH MINE . YOU MUST BE A MUSLIM; TO BE UNDERSTOOD A FINE .

Lin,thanks for this impressive thread.I wanna share one of my poems with you.I hope you enjoy it.Regards.

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İf a child lives with criticism,

    he learns to condemn.

İf a child lives with hostility,

    he learns to fight.

İf a child lives with ridicule,

    he learns to be shy.

İf a child lives with shame,

    he learns to feel guilty.

İf a child lives with tolerance,

    he learns to be pattient.

İf a child lives with encouragement,

    he learns confidence.

İf a child lives with praise,

     he learns to appreciate.

İf a child lives with fairness,

     he learns justice.

İf a child lives with security,

      he learns to have faith.

İf a child lives with approval,

      he learns to like himself.

İf a child lives with acceptance & friendship,

      he learns to find love in the world.

Let the child live in freedom…

The only a child can become a Wise Man!!!

These are really wise thoughts! Let everyone read and understand them and our world will turn into a paradise!

YEAH, DIGNIFIED YOU ARE ALL A RIGHT, MY SPPORT TO YOU :

THAT IS THE CHILD,

WHO HAD BEEN DIED

HE HAD A DIED,

IN A SURE , FOR ALL ,

_ FOR THE ALL OF THE BLIND ,

WHOSE HAS THE BLAME

BECAUSE OF THE FLAM,

WHICH CAUSED THE FLAME,

 TO A LONG WAR,

NOT END, NOT SO FAR …

YEAH, HE IS, WHO KILLS…

AS IN BEHIND, AS IN A FAR …

THIS MINE FOR MUHAMMAD A' DORRAH AND THE BROTHERS IN IRAG .

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5KvHB7_k-U&feature=related

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQSuLBK64Lw