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almajroha

almajroha

Oman

March 26, 2009

 

Once upon a time, there was a poor family which lived in a small house on the countryside. There were two boys and two girls who lived with their mother, as their father was dead. The mother worked in a lot of houses as a servant to give her children a better life and to send them to schools. She used to advise her sons and daughters to be successful and achieve something in their lives. Every morning she woke up at 6 o'clock. When her children went to school, she worked in her neighbors' houses from morning till night. After six months of hard working she became very tired and pallid. Then her eldest son, Mohammed, took her to the hospital. Dr. Ali said, ''Sorry. But I am really sad to tell you that your mother has cancer''. Mohammed was shocked and he couldn't say a word. Whereas, his mother was collapsed, disappointed and frightened. After they returned to their house, he said, ''Mama you must stay in the house and I'll be responsible for the family''. But she didn't do what he said. Next morning she went to work as usual because she didn't want any of her children to leave the school. Mohammed tried to persuade her but he couldn't. Then he decided to work after he returned from school as a bootblack. After he came from school he started working. He never complained a bout his work. He worked hard to help his mother and his siblings. A few months later, the mother become very tired and she said in a sad voice, "Mohammed please promise me that you will take care of your siblings". He felt that something misfortunate was going to happen. He answered in a scared voice, "Sure, I will take care of them, don't worry". After some time she died. He became grief-stricken and he wept with his siblings. Nobody helped them, so he worked hard to earn enough money to send his brother and sisters to school. His youngest brother, Ahmed, tried to persuade Mohammed to let him work but Mohammed refused. He wanted to keep the promise he had made to his mother. He decided to save some money from his work and then he opened a small shop and he walked had and the shop grew bigger. Their lives changed for the better. All of his siblings finished their high school and they attended the university.
After a few years, his siblings graduated from the university and became successful. Ahmed became a pilot. Aysha became a successful teacher and Nora became a doctor. Whereas, Mohammed became a business man and he got married. He loved his wife. He had five children. He sat with them and told them about his sacrifice, patience and long suffering.
  by my pen Kiss

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07:25 AM Mar 27 2009

almajroha

almajroha
Oman

thanks khalied

12:23 AM Mar 27 2009

almajroha

almajroha
Oman

oh my lovely girl

thanks too much

but still i'm not advanced to write books

hahahaha

i'n in the beginning

thanks again

may god bless u ;)

04:04 PM Mar 26 2009

ReEno_94

ReEno_94
Jordan

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww  i like it wlahe keep on my friend u have ability to write books and small stores  u must write books and publishing on the side  world andddddddddd please when u write another time please write poetry coz i enjoy to read the poetry ...love u so much bye bye god bless y Kiss

02:16 PM Mar 26 2009

almajroha

almajroha
Oman

thanks east for ur nice comment

thanks for encouraging me

may God bless u

02:07 PM Mar 26 2009

East-Bird

East-Bird
Saudi Arabia

 

if you're not good in writing, then what should I call myself ?!!

good luck in this course then, and just put ur attempts so we can enjoy reading them  Smile

 

11:47 AM Mar 26 2009

almajroha

almajroha
Oman

thanks east for ur wonderful comment

but still i'm not good in writing

this semester i have course depend on writing stories, novels and poems

so i'm trying to do something

08:12 AM Mar 26 2009

East-Bird

East-Bird
Saudi Arabia

wow, just wow ..

i can say that u're great writer ..

the story was short, direct, meaingfu.

the plot is just amazing Smile

 and yah, nothing comes easy in this life .. we've to fight through this life, and struggle to get want we want. to become happy and make our relatives happy and everyone around us.

 

Thanks for ur Effort .. ^^

07:29 AM Mar 26 2009

almajroha

almajroha
Oman

i'm waiting for comments