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boboahmed

boboahmed

Egypt

November 14, 2009

sometimes
u wish to be alone to review ur life,without anyone disturb u or interrupt ur thoughts
sometimes u wish to be alone
to remember ur beautiful memories with ur self to which u r eager and hope the time change and go back to live with it again
sometimes u wish to be alone
to know the reason why u cant keep up with the life,
why u found ur self change continuously ,and couldn't stop this change,
why u feel u r in fight and challenge everyday
sometimes u wish to be alone
to escape from ur problems or to take a break and then go back to find new problems
sometimes u wish to be alone
to break ur the chores or routine,trying to make change but all u do u repair ur self to be able to deal with this routine again
but always u wish to be alone
to get feeling of freedom and remove all ur trammels
so when u ask me why u wanna be alone
i will answer u
to get my freedom

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11:28 PM Nov 15 2009

dd egypt

dd egypt
Egypt

hi,

real feeling

your (prose) read all the egyption youth's feeling. im saying it is a prose as there are no rhyme in this, so you cant say it is a poem.

you are a very good writer.

i should raise the hat in a salute to what you wrote.

 

09:11 PM Nov 15 2009

viona helena
Indonesia

Smile i dont know why?

i'm feeling the same just like in your poem now Laughing

but we have to wake up...

and realize..

in our real life...

 

the bitter of the honesty is much better than the sweet of something fake ..

 

nice poem Smile

01:48 AM Nov 15 2009

kinawang

kinawang
China

sometimes that's always a used word .but for you  life which u wanna be .it's so special Smile 

01:08 AM Nov 15 2009

hazem02

hazem02
Jordan

beautiful amazing feelings that you want to keep remembering through your sweet memories..

keep on dear sweet poet..

yours,..

hazem al..

11:43 PM Nov 14 2009

keyyang

keyyang
China

beautiful poem.Smilelife is suck,sometimes we hide.sometimes we fight.but what we can not be through is to get over all of these bad"sometimes".so we better to move on without complaint