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Dafi

Malaysia

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August 11, 2008

Nowadays we've been faced the increased of fuel cost that could impinged on people particularly low income group..The soaring fuel cost is such a whole new ball game to the people lifestyle that forcing people to be more frugal or thrifty spending their money.the affect of the soaring fuel cost make all essential goods are increasing highly and all the traders take the advantage of increasing cost to high their price,this is not fair to the people especially to the poverty .the traders shouldn't increase their price only for negligible reasonsThe price of goods were foreseen could increased due to Hari Raya Aidilfitri or fasting month because they will be taking the advantage to high their price and the traders were also coaxed their customers by giving a sale or half price so customers have to be more scrupulous before buying something because certain traders were increased their price first and then given the sale so the prices were same thus the customers were cheated. i have the story to tell to ya all, recently i was read the news about poverty and im kinda sad because she is a spinster and poverty has forced her to lived at chicken coop and has been living with plenty of chickens for four years , she used to stay in relatives but she was moved out when they want her to pay rent.with her age 57 she is still working at grocery store.so moral of the story don't waste your money by buying unnecessary things,use it properly,,life in moderation,being thrifty and so on.... the End ..hehe

please correct my grammar..Laughing

10:13 AM Aug 15 2008

Dafi

Dafi
Malaysia

sure? i think that sentence is correct because after was or were plus participle (+ed/+n/Sp) so was moved is correct...

03:48 AM Aug 14 2008

yukihime

yukihime
Malaysia

well the only thing i see is 'was moved'. it should be 'was moving' because after is, are, was or were you must put ing.... well i think thats all but i thing there are more...

April 16, 2008

hello....have you ever watch spongebob squarepants ?if you haven't how about you try watch this cartoon because its was so funny and little weird compare with other cartoon for instance a cat on spongebob will be a snail like Gary,a dog will be a worm or snake,the cloud be a flower and so on hehehe.....Below is my favourite characters ...

 

 Spongebob 

this is the main characters of this cartoon.... i like this character because its so funny and cute especially when he laughing.spongebob live in the pineapple,he has a good friends call patrick star ,he like catching the jellyfish,he working at the krusty crab as a chef ,he have a ability to make a delicious burger that call krabby patty,he always failed on the boating school test that make Mrs puff tress teaching him hehe and spongebob also got  cat (but its look like a snail hehe) named Gary........

Patrick star

this character is a best friends of spongebob,he live under the rock,this character also funny because its look like little bit crazy and silly huhu.He also love catching the jellyfish,and he can eat everything ..hehe

 

Mr crab 

 He is a employer of the krusty crab,what can i conclude about him is he really like Money,if he saw the money he will be crazy hehe..

squidward 

he is a cuttlefish that very like to play a hurmmmm im forgot that thing hehe sorry ,he really dont like spongebob and patrick star because both of them always disturbing him especially when he take a rest on the weekend,and so on...

 

PLEASE SEND YOUR COMMENT ABOUT MY ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND EVERYTHING ,THAT I CAN IMPROVE MY ENGLISH AND CORRECT THE WRONG Embarassed

11:03 PM Aug 10 2008

rheni
Indonesia

Hi Dafi,

I have some correction for you. Even actually my English is also just like you. But I've seen that your grammar need a little correction. But sometimes native says that grammar is not too important in communication, only in formal writing such as research it's a must.

Use "have + V3" --> have watched

Use "to be + Ving" --> he's laughing

I haven't seen all, but I hope that's enough to add your knowledge. 

Rheni

 

 

 

 

07:10 AM Aug 03 2008

ButterFli

ButterFli
United States

Spongebob is the best, no comparison lol :D

12:38 AM Jul 31 2008

yukihime

yukihime
Malaysia

oh yeah and i am still learning but many people have help you

12:36 AM Jul 31 2008

yukihime

yukihime
Malaysia

hahahaah you love spongebob too? so do i

10:50 PM Jul 17 2008

麦田里的阳光

麦田里的阳光
China

my english is soso..if what i pointed out is wrong..please tell me ok?the first one is..have u ever watch(watched)..and the second one is that i don't understand that setence.....''if u u haven't know about...""what do u want to express..the second one is..tryto do or try doing....thanx....

04:07 AM Jul 03 2008

owendavis33
Philippines

Spongebob this is the main character of this cartoon.... i like this character >> because its (it's/it is) so funny and cute especially when he laughing (laughs/is laughing). >> spongebob live (lives) in the pineapple, >> he has a good friends (friend >> because you use the article A) >> call (called) patrick star , >> he like (likes>> subject-verb aggreement) catching jellyfish, >> he working (works) at the krusty crab as a chef , >> he have (has use for singular subject, noun, pronoun and have is use for plural subject) >> a (an >> use when the next word starts with a vowel) ability to make a delicious burger >> that call ( is called) krabby patty, >> he always failed (fails) on the boating school test >> that make (makes) Mrs puff so stressed teaching him hehe and spongebob also got cat (but it looks like a snail hehe) named Gary........ Patrick star this character is best friends of spongebob,he live (lives) under the rock,this character (is) also funny because its (it) look (looks) like little bit crazy and silly huhu.He also love (loves) catching the jellyfish,and he can eat everything ..hehe Mr crab He is a (an) employer of the krusty crab,what can i conclude about him is he (is) really like (likes) Money,if he saw (sees) the money he goes crazy hehe.. squidward he is a cuttlefish that very like (likes) to play a hurmmmm im (I) forgot that thing hehe sorry ,he really dont (doesn't) like spongebob and patrick star because (they) both disturbing (disturb) him especially when he take (takes) a rest on the weekend(s),and so on... PLEASE SEND YOUR COMMENT ABOUT MY ENGLISH GRAMMAR AND EVERYTHING ,THAT I CAN IMPROVE MY ENGLISH AND CORRECT THE WRONG

12:51 AM Jun 24 2008

Casiol

Casiol
Malaysia

i love spongebob too :D

ok let's see.... there's a few mistakes but when i tried to correct it i'll get confuse too :p

 

so i think Brian can help u - Mapleleaf Man 

feel free to write to him n definitely he'll help u :)

(sorry i'm not his PA i just wanna help people too)

April 14, 2008

hello everyone i make this blog just want to improve my english hehe ..this is my first blog i have no idea what to talk on my blog .i just want to  share my story about why i like beyonce knowles hehe ...why do i like beyonce because i think she a good performance i ever seen she can dance she can sing very well and everything she can do......i like beyonce when i saw her performance at MTV europe (maybe i not sure im forgot already )ehehehe she sang 'baby boy' featuring sean paul when i saw her performance my first expression like this Surprised haha especially when her dance on floor with fire around her.........

 

from that i like beyonce so much and her songs also very nice like crazy in love,baby boy,dangerously in love,me my self and i and much more.from all her albums i really like dangerously in love album because all song from this album very cool ....what else?i have no idea already ......in the nutshell thank for reading my Blog..... see u soon bye ........

  

12:34 PM Aug 17 2011

analee

analee
Malaysia

hi! i'm a new learner here... so... from what i can see here, u've made some noticeable mistakes... such as: " i think she a good performance i ever seen" you should say " i think she is a good performer that i have ever seen.." and, instead of   "(maybe i not sure im forgot already )" you should say "( i'm not sure, i forgot already)... it might sound better .... btw, my english is also still at baby level... same as everyone here.... so let's improving together... ^ ^