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Dafi

Dafi

Malaysia

August 11, 2008

Nowadays we've been faced the increased of fuel cost that could impinged on people particularly low income group..The soaring fuel cost is such a whole new ball game to the people lifestyle that forcing people to be more frugal or thrifty spending their money.the affect of the soaring fuel cost make all essential goods are increasing highly and all the traders take the advantage of increasing cost to high their price,this is not fair to the people especially to the poverty .the traders shouldn't increase their price only for negligible reasonsThe price of goods were foreseen could increased due to Hari Raya Aidilfitri or fasting month because they will be taking the advantage to high their price and the traders were also coaxed their customers by giving a sale or half price so customers have to be more scrupulous before buying something because certain traders were increased their price first and then given the sale so the prices were same thus the customers were cheated. i have the story to tell to ya all, recently i was read the news about poverty and im kinda sad because she is a spinster and poverty has forced her to lived at chicken coop and has been living with plenty of chickens for four years , she used to stay in relatives but she was moved out when they want her to pay rent.with her age 57 she is still working at grocery store.so moral of the story don't waste your money by buying unnecessary things,use it properly,,life in moderation,being thrifty and so on.... the End ..hehe

please correct my grammar..Laughing

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10:13 AM Aug 15 2008

Dafi

Dafi
Malaysia

sure? i think that sentence is correct because after was or were plus participle (+ed/+n/Sp) so was moved is correct...

03:48 AM Aug 14 2008

yukihime

yukihime
Malaysia

well the only thing i see is 'was moved'. it should be 'was moving' because after is, are, was or were you must put ing.... well i think thats all but i thing there are more...