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hennda

hennda

Tunisia

December 23, 2008

                            EMPTY SEAT

Why when I look at your empty seat

I feel that my heart can't beat ?

When you look at me I feel the heat

Why can't I stand on my feet?

Please come and tell me,stop this fire,stop this heat.

When you smile I feel like

Earthe's inferno is under my feet.

Can't you look at my face ?

Can't you hear my weak lonely heart beat?

 

*I wrot this poem and I hope you will like it.If there is or are some mistakes don't hesitate just tell me and I'll be happy to correct them.

Thanks in advance

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06:51 AM Dec 24 2008

hennda

hennda
Tunisia

hi

Thanks for the comment!

I think it is not about being brave or not.I put my poetry here because I think I need some peoples opinions.

By the way I never tire or get ride of my poems even if they are bad I keep them and see them from time to time.My poems are a part of me,they present things i went through so keeping them is important for me.

04:49 AM Dec 24 2008

Khatun
Azerbaijan

I liked ur poem, friend. U're courageous. I'd never dare to put my poems here. I always write and then tear them. What can I do? I don't like them

04:10 AM Dec 24 2008

hennda

hennda
Tunisia

I'm happy you like it!!!

10:43 PM Dec 23 2008

dignified

dignified
Turkey

Excellent.