The novel which I write is my first .

This novel which I write is my first. Welcome you give me suggestion and advice Thank you very much!

Topic: Adventure in Saiala Kingdom

One day, Jack and Rose were searching for their elder sister, Wendy. They wanted to ask Wendy to help them homework. “Mom, do you see elder sister?” They enter kitchen. Mother with them and said “No, I don’t. You can go out to search for Wendy. “Mom said. Then they go out to search for elder sister. But they still could not see her. Finally, they entered Wendy’s room. Suddenly, they see strange red words on the mirror. It was written “come on!!” When Jack is touching the mirror, he and Rose were pulled to the mirror. They arrived at somewhere which was a forest with many fairies.         “Jack, where are we?” Rose said. “I don’t know. I never come here before.” Jack said. They walked slowly and looked around. “Can we go home?” It is spooky. I’m scared.” Rose says. “Don’t worry. We will go home surely.” Jack patted on Rose’s shoulder and said. All at once, they saw their elder sister. “Hey, Wendy, why were you here?” Jack was surprised. “I don’t know. When I touched my mirror, I was pulled in here.” Wendy said. Then they kept walking and they bumped into a fairy which was flying in the sky. That fairy was small and blue. “Oh, human, you finally come on. I here already waited for you for a long time.” fairy said. “What’s wrong?” Where is here?” And how do we go home?” Wendy said. “Here is Saiala Kingdom. Originally, It was very peaceful until U-Ke came. So you can’t go home until you defeat U-Ke. By the way, my name is Ka-Bi.” Fairy said. ”Oh, it is unbelievable. Why do you find us? We are human without away specific ability.” Jack said.        “It is okay. I will give you magic. It humans use magic they will increase their power. And……I’m sorry, I involve you into this event,” fairy said. “Well, let it go at that.” Jack said. Then the fairy gave them magic with his magic wand. And teach them to speak incantation. “You can speak incantation now.” The fairy said. It is magical. They can use magic and fly in the sky. Jack has fire ability, Rose has water ability, and Wendy has electricity and wind ability. Abruptly, black fairies appeared behind them. “Hurry up, we can’t be caught by them” Jack said. ”You follow me to my home. We will plan tactic which attack U-Ke.” fairy said. Finally, they arrived at his home. They want to be numb U-Ke’s body with electricity and attack him with their magic. But they didn’t know this wanted affect to U-Ke. When they were ready, they started to attack him. First, they wanted to attack U-Ke’s castle, but his castle was so firm that they couldn’t destroy it, and there were many guards. Then they used their magic together. Finally, they destroyed his castle. In order to go home, Jack, Rose and Wendy thought hard to attack U-Ke. So they continued their plan. In the end, U-K was going to die. “Ka-Bi, you are so sly. You can’t unite humas to attack me.” U-Ke said. “It is not sly. You invade our Kingdom. You shouldn’t do it.” Ka-Bi said angrily. Then U-Ke died. “Wow, we defeated bad fairy in the end. We can go home.” Rose said. “Thank you very much, humans. I appreciate your help.Now I help you go home. This is a small present. Please accept it.” Ka-Bi said. And he gave them a beautiful rock. “Thank you,” they said. Later, they went home from an exit. And they were in Wendy’s room. “Is it a dream?” Rose said. ”Maybe, but……it was not a dream….” Wendy saw her hand with a rock on it.