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August 12, 2007
Hi boys and girls from around the world and good morning to you. Well, It is just a great day, so, I've decided to interchange my thoughts and my words of feeling through a poem I've written long time ago when I was in the first year at the University.
I will put all my faith on you. I am just like everybody else in here, I make mistakes, so, if you caught any mistake whether grammatically or in spelling, inform me at once and with explanations as well so I can learn a lesson and all of my friends here learn as well. By the way, comment on the poem once you read it and I really appreciate criticism and critics.
Here I begin and here I start my journey in the English world. The poem entitled : The Stray Child. Share your thoughts.
- A stray child lost, roaming the streets,
- Hearing terrible songs,
- No one even seeks out to treat,
- An innocent child cannot eat.
- In monochrome nights, he weeps,
- Has anyone dared to look?
- At a stray child who is weak?
- Fighting his sorrow's loneliness,
- Just to live in peace.
- Dancing with the night's wind alone,
- His favorite song, the spirit of the night,
- Yet, no one glared to see him grieve,
- Bleeding tears upon his mother's breast,
- Mother "I want to be like the rest."
- "Where are the night's tones?"
- Sing for him the song of the moon.
- Let him rest in peace, Live in peace.
- In your silence lap, only he weeps.
Sorry, but it seems the Blog Entry Doesn't support things like poems. Anyway, I hope you like it as well as feeling it.
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