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May 26, 2010

Once upon a time, before the great earthquake, there was an old big pinkish town called Petra. This town was full of life and its people were well known their kindness and happy life, till the arrival of seven giants, evil wizards whom they called The Eaters of Light. They went down to town from the great temple. As they were marching, the earth trembled and all the creatures hated them. It was dawn time when the villagers woke up afraid and scare to see the wizards up town there, eating the morning light, about the screams of the villagers they never care.Thier mouths opened so wide and all the light traveled inside within their tremendous stomach went to hide. Then, the wizards made a cursed circle around the town, so anybody who tried to escape will be changed into a big frog with a wooden crown. Nothing in the sky stayed but the darkness and the wizards left the town sinking in madness. When the Eaters of light ruleSon of Adam cries and the stonesFor those blind shall be no harmBecause the light will hide with charm Ten years had passed away but the darkness still stay .Petra was moaning under the bloody curse and the people become bloodless and cry. They seeked for thousands and thousands paths to survive but the darkness still stay. The sun never raises and the moon was too weak to provide light. They asked their Sheikh Abass for help, the old man who has a long white beard of wisdom. For him, to make a mistake was seldom. The old man said to them: It has been said by the book:"For those blind shall be no harm"Bring me the the blind twinAnd we will see after then. The villagers brought him two shining blind twins. A boy called Salim and a girl called Salma.They had never made a sin and their hearts were as pure as crestal.Althought they were blind; they were different than the rest of human kind. They could listen to the talk of ants and they could smell the seven rivers of Mousa far away.Thier senses were very powerful. The old man told them everything about the disaster, and they shall go into a journey very faster. He took them to his house. He told them about the wizards and how to break the curse of the darkness. He said: You are the blind seekers in the darknessNo harm shall touch youYou are the two little lights of hopeI shall help the town and you must too He told them to go to the great temple of Petra where the wizards live and there was a great gift to be giving; a mysterious book belonged to one of the seven wizards. This book left behind forgotten, the Sheikh took it and saved it in his store. He told the child to burn the book in the great fire of the temple to break the curse and bring back the light to the cursed twon.The twin were afraid that they will change into frogs with crowns when they crossed the boards of the town but he told them that the curse only meant to be for those people who could see the light not the blind ones. The twin took the book and started the journey at once. When the Eaters of light ruleSon of Adam cries and the stonesFor those blind shall be no harmBecause the light will hide with charmSon of Adam shall seek hopeThat cannot disappeared or stopTo the Old man shall they goTo the white beard wisdom they goFinding two little hopes of lightTo bring back the morning from the nightAlthough they cannot seeBut the destiny will tell them where to beAnd the journey is too long too longThey need to be wise and strong Salim and his sister started their journey full of hope and strenghth.They crossed the boards of the Petra while the villagers were watching them leaving .Their parent cried but what to do? Their children must go as a final hope and deep deep through; they disappeared in the dark forest holding each other's hand. They walked long with out stop. Then after awhile Salma felt tired and dropped .They were far a way from their town.Sudenly they heard a strong roar of a lion. They stood with fear and headed up to the source of the roar. There were a lion with his son crossing the forest and they smelled the twin. The Lion stopped and said in wonder "Son of Adam and a daughter of Eve! Long time no see such creatures like you here. What are you doing near the cursed town?" The twin were astounded because they could understand the lion speech but they remembered that they are unique.Salim answered bravely:" We are going to the great temple to fight the Eaters of light and bring back the light to our people in Petra". The lion laughed but his son did not. The son said "My father told me about your miserable story, but how you two could stand against the wizards?" Salma said with a smile in her lips "We have a secret weapon which will help us to defeat the wizards". The lion could see how much determined were the twin so he decided to help them to win. He said "since we are all creatures belong to this land we will help you to get out of the dark forest and reach a clear stand, come and climb my back, I will be your ride today". The lion and his son ran and ran across the forest carrying the twin very fast till they left the forest to a clear stand of land. The lion told them that he couldn't go further more and they shall depend on themselves to cross the seven rivers of Mousa to reach the walls of the great temple.Salim and Salma thanked the lions and went on their way. They walked too long through a flat land full of nothing but white soil. Then Salam said that she could smell the water. The Rivers stopped and talked to them "Son of Adam and daughter of Eve! Long time no see such creatures like you here. What are you doing near the shore of the seven rivers?" The two twins answered the same answer they gave to the lions then the rivers said to them "come along dear ones, we all hate the eaters of light and we will help you to reach the great temple." The twin jumped into a huge bubble made by the rivers to keep the twin inside save from the water. The rivers traveled too fast through the land and the rocks carrying the twin inside. The fishes inside the rivers talked to them and tried to support them as well.Suddnely, the rivers stopped falling and put the twin in a dry land again and left wishing them good luck. The great temple was there very close to them. They could smell the rocks, the holy fire and the old soil near the temple. They walked heading to the gate of the temple holding the book tide .When they were close to the gate, they heard a strong deep voice talking to them, it was the Father Walls who protect the temple along with his sons, the walls. He said furiously:    Run Son of Adam dum dumOr I will chew you like a gumRun before I make hum humGo a way do not come come    But the twin never went back and they said in one voice: We are the blind seekers in the darknessNo harm shall touch weWe are the two little lights of hopeThee shall help we to make the light free The wall's father bended himself and opened his tremendous stony mouth to swallow the brave twin but they raised up the mysterious book in front of the great wall and so he backed off and returned to his place moaning. He screamed "dum dum, from where this book comes?"Salim said that they got the book from the Sheik Abass to protect them and the Father Walls shall not stopp them from going inside the temble.The Father walls said that only one of the children was allowed to go inside and the other shall wait outside but the twin insisted to enter the temple together. The Father Walls tried to stop them but thousands of rocks near the temple gathered very fast and jumped to his face hitting him strongly and screaming to the twin " Go dum dum, we will hit him before he hum hum thee, go and fight for your destiny ".The twin went inside the temple running and running till they arrived to the ceremonials room. There were a huge fire in the center and the seven giants wizards were sleeping deeply along with their books beside them except one wizard. The twin could hear them snoring loudly. Salim walked very slowly toward the hot fire and started to collect the books one by one. He was very careful to let the wizards awaken and see him getting close to the fire. He threw the seven books into the fire and they exploded. The moment he they exploded, all the wizards woke up and looked at the twins madly with their big red eyes .The wizards tried to eat the twin but it seemed that they had lost their power. The wizards screamed in pain and they started to vanish one by one. When the last one gone, a huge amount of light came form the fire and filled the whole temple and the sky outside with great powerful light as if thousands suns were shining at once. The light continued to grow high and high till it reached the Petra .There was no more darkness.Salim and Salam opened their eyes for the first time. They could see as normal people .They were very happy and they returned to their parent and people in Petra and they lived happily ever after.  

"TWO Little Light of Hop" – the poem-By Hemoo83||||

 When the eaters of light ruleSon of Adam cry and the stonesFor those blind shall be no harmBecause the light will hide with charmSon of Adam shall seek hopeThat cannot be disappear or stopTo the Old man shall they goTo the white beard wisdom they goFinding two little hopes of lightTo bring back the morning from the nightAlthough they cannot seeBut destiny will tell them where to beAnd the journey is too long too longThey need to be wise and strongThe lions will help them and the riversAnd the rocks against father wall togetherWhat better than light in the heart!What better when the twin cannot depart!The wizards around the fire will sleepAnd the Heros go deep and deepTill the books talk with fireBrave effort shall be always admired  

   

Note: all the story including the ideas, the events and the poems are from the creation and the imagination of the writer himself .There is no any kind of copying or translating from other stories or resources.

wrttin by : Hemoo83

 

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