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can anyone help me to correct the grammatical mistakes in this passage, i need your help ,,thanx

oscarwukaka

Taiwan

There are more and more casinos developing in Macau. A lot of casinos are going to finish building. Therefore, casinos in Macau complete closely. As a successful casino, knowing how to utilize marketing tactic very efficiently is one of the most important key. And print advertisement is also one of the most significant tools in promotion tactic. For this reason, many casinos’ print advertisements have already emerged recently. In point of the variation of economical standard in Macau, I think cultural and educational standard have to change necessarily. However, there are not enough educational sources and information in casinos’ areas nowadays. Obviously, culture can not develop together with economic in Macau. Consequently, I consider this study is very significant and even necessary.

In point of the method of classifying in this study, due to casino in Macau would like to use different marketing tactic and advertising design according to different target audiences. Therefore, before I analyze the print advertisements, I will classify all the casinos’ print to four sorts. The four sorts are classified for below:

(1).The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on local periodical.

(2)The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on china.

(3)The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on abroad.

(4)The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on all areas.

After I finish collecting and classifying all the information, I will begin to analyze the copies of advertisements, such as headline, sub -catch body copy and so on. At the same time, I will analyze the visual elements too, such as arrangement, text size and sort, color, value etc.

06:56 PM May 28 2008 |

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aljensen

aljensen

United States

I don't think you mean to use just the word "variation"

09:22 PM May 28 2008 |

aljensen

aljensen

United States

There are more and more casinos developing in Macau. A lot of casinos are going to finish construction soon. Therefore, casinos in Macau must compete closely with one another. As a successful casino, knowing how to utilize marketing tactics very efficiently is one of the most important keys. And print advertising is also one of the most significant promotional tools. For this reason, many casinos’ print advertisements have already emerged recently. In light of the variation of economic standards in Macau, I think cultural and educational standards have to change necessarily. However, there are not enough educational sources and information in casinos’ areas nowadays. Obviously, culture can not develop together with the economy in Macau. Consequently, I consider this study to be very significant and even necessary.
In point of the method of classifying in this study, due to the casino industry in Macau I would like to use different marketing tactics and advertising design according to different target audiences. Therefore, before I analyze the print advertisements, I will classify all the casinos’ print in four sorts. The four sorts are classified for below:
(1).The advertisements of Macau casinos posted in local periodicals.
(2)The advertisements of Macau casinos posted in China.
(3)The advertisements of Macau casinos posted abroad.
(4)The advertisements of Macau casinos posted in all areas.
After I finish collecting and classifying all the information, I will begin to analyze the copies of advertisements, such as headline, sub -catch body copy and so on. At the same time, I will analyze the visual elements too, such as arrangement, text size and sort, color, value etc.

09:23 PM May 28 2008 |

henda2

Tunisia

Day after day the number of casinos in Macau is rising. First of all, by the end this year a lot of casinos are going to finish building. One of the most important factors of success for a casino is the ability to use marketing tactic in a wise way and also printing advertisement is one of the most significant tools in promotion tactics. For this reason, many casinos’ print advertisements have already emerged recently. In point of the variation of economical standard in Macau, I think cultural and educational standard have to change necessarily. However, the lack of educational sources and information in casinos’ areas nowadays is an obstical.Obviously, culture can not develop together with economic in Macau. Consequently, I consider that this study is very significant and even highly important.

In point of the method of classifying in this study,casinos in Macau would like to use different marketing tactic and advertising design according to different target audiences. Therefore, before  analyzing the print advertisements, I will be dealing with the classification of all the casinos’ print to four sorts. which are classified for below:

(1).The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on local periodical.

(2)The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on china.

(3)The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on abroad.

(4)The advertisements of Macau casinos are posted on all areas.

Finaly, I 'll conclude with collecting and classifying all the information. I will begin to analyze the copies of advertisements, such as headline, sub -catch body copy and so on. At the same time, I will analyze the visual elements too, such as arrangement, text size and sort, color, value etc

( I hope that this will help you good luck)

N!B:Never start ur sentence with 'and'

10:08 PM May 28 2008 |

aljensen

aljensen

United States

You can sometimes begin a sentence with "and", although generally speaking it is discouraged :) Certainly, you want to write "posted in" not "on" unless you are talking about internet forums or literal bulletin boards….

Oscar, I don't understand what you mean by "However, there are not enough educational sources and information in casinos’ areas nowadays. Obviously, culture can not develop together with the economy in Macau."

11:25 PM May 28 2008 |

mcyasser

mcyasser

Syrian Arab Republic

yasser_s85(at)hotmail(dot)com

07:46 PM Jun 01 2008 |