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felle

Germany

Hi,

 I want to apply for a job and wrote an application form. Can someone look through it, if it is ok?

Thanks a lot

12:28 AM Apr 18 2007 |

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felle

Germany

I was interested to see your advertisement for flight attendants on your Website. Following my training at the school  for  hotel management in Slovakia I graduated with a high-school diploma and spent 3 years working on different river and cruise ships for the suisse company Scylla Tours and the german shipping company Hapag-Lloyd Kreuzfahrten GmbH. Due to the international cruising areas I served guests from different nations (all over the world) 

As I grew up speaking several languages I am able to talk english, german, slovakian and czech fluently. I also have knowledges in russian, polish and croatian.

 

I gained my experiences in dealing with people and service in the last 7 years  on several 4-star-cruising ships, restaurants and bars as a somelier  and waitress.

 

Since the beginning of this year I have been working as a flight attendant for LTU Airline in Munich with longhaul as well as shorthaul service.

 

My skills: multilingual, very good knowledge of human nature, a very friendly teamworker, able to work under pressure, a professional appearance and very good knowledges in service with high standard.

 

I hope my experiences as a shipattendant, responsible supervisor and my current position as a flight attendant have convinced you that I will provide your company with a highly motivated employee.

 I am confident that I can perform the job effectively, and I am excited about the idea of working for your firm. 

The enclosed CV elaborates on the details of my skills and experience.

 I look forward to meeting with you to discuss the ways my skills may best serve your company.  Thank you for your time and consideration. Kind regards, 

12:37 AM Apr 18 2007 |

felle

Germany

Can someone please help me!! It´s very urgent.

12:02 PM Apr 18 2007 |

KayG

KayG

United Kingdom

It's pretty good as it is.  A few points you might consider:

 

Languages and nationalities should have a capital letter.

 

Knowledge is uncountable and experience should be in this context. 

 

'I was interested to see your advertisement for flight attendants on your Website.' – Do they really want flight attendants on their website? I'd change the word order here.

 

'Kind regards,' – is friendly but perhaps a little informal for a job application.  

07:04 PM Apr 18 2007 |

Queen of Fairies

Belarus

It's pretty fine, good luck with your job!

09:31 AM Apr 20 2007 |

baggio2003

China

good luck, you can make it

01:27 AM Apr 21 2007 |

isabellaego

Botswana

u should say "i am interesed" in the first line

04:37 AM Apr 22 2007 |