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MY WEBSITE! :D soo please help me and give me some feedbaks :)

daalex

daalex

Sweden

Hello all nice people! Right now i have published my website. This site is about my self and my music. And everyone can listen to my work and se what music equipment i have. So check it out :)

http://www.alexanderricciuti.studio.nu/

Soo it would be very nice of you to give some feedbacks. and if you see something wrong with the english or something you can tell me. But the site is still not finnished.
soon i will have a emial form there so people can write to me directly from the website :)

PS: This website is an school project as well. Tongue out

10:30 PM Sep 04 2010 |

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charming princess

Saudi Arabia

Your website is awesome !  we have a talented person here on English, baby ! . Well, I listened to the audio on the site. The music is soothing and relaxing as well. I wish you all the best !

 Since you asked us  to correct your English, here are some corrections .

... my biggest hobbies.

I always strive to improve my talent as a producer and to improve my studio

interested instead of instressted

 It started when I saw ….

..in school . ( no need to use an article here)

 

Very limited …  ( do you mean basic? )

 

but diden't get me into it so deph  ( you need to rewrite this sentence) Smile

 

little bit instead of litle bit

 

 

04:19 PM Sep 07 2010 |

daalex

daalex

Sweden

Thanks alot!! I'm glad that you listen to my music ^^ And thanks for the feedbacks! Now the site is little bit more better Laughing

11:51 AM Sep 10 2010 |