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 It's my story that I wrote for Writing class.I need someone check grammar of me. Plz.

    Destiny of Love

This is a story of Nutsuya Asachi, a boy who is 21 years. Last year, he had an exciting situation which changed his life. Nutsu was a student of Toki University and lived with his parents. He had no sibling. One day after studying, while he was going back home strangers came and applied chloroform to him. Then Nutsu became unconscious. Nutsu wake up in the morning and felt dizzy because of the effect of chloroform. ‘Where is this?’ It was the first question he thought of. Suddenly, the strangers who kidnapped him walked up to him and dragged him to keep walking. They also bound him the rope. “Hey! Who are you? Ah…And what do you want from me? Where is thi…” he asked. “Shut up!!” one of them yelled. “Ha Hah!! Afraid? Boy, here is Hong Kong. We're going to sell you as the gigolo. You have no choice boy” said the strangers. “Wha…What? Gigolo? No! Please, leave me. I can give you money. Take me back to home please” Nutsu begged them. “Ha Hah!! Sorry, we can’t. We know you and your family have no money now. Ha Hah!” one of them said. “My family? Why? What happen?” Nutsu asked them “Shut up!!” they shouted at him. Suddenly, there were two men in black suit walked up to them. They talked to the strangers near him so silently. Those men came to caught him and dragged him into the building labeled ‘Yarkz Harem’. They went to the top floor of the building at ‘President Room’ Inside that room, Nutsu saw a man in stylist black suit with glasses was sitting on a big chair and looking at him. That man was very handsome and seems calm. ”What’s your name?” asked the man “Na…Nutsu, Nutsuya Asachi” Nutsu answer him. “Um…Nutsu. I’m Jang Hao. I’m Yarkz Harem’s owner. Nice to meet you” Jang Hao said and shook hands with Nutsu. Nutsu didn’t know what was in his mind when he met Jang Hao. Jang Hao seems calm but when he looked in his eyes, he found the kindness, he felt warm. He didn’t feel afraid like he fell for the strangers. “You are cute” said Jang Hao. Nutsu was excited when Jang Hao walked closed to him and said he was cute! “I think I’m falling in love…with you” Jang Hao whispered to him. Nutsu was frightened with the sentence. After that Jang Hao persuaded Nutsu to live with him. Nutsu lived with Jang Hao for 3 months. He also fell in love with him. Because of closeness and attention that Jang Hao paid to him. One day, Jang Hao and Nutsu went to shopping at XP Plaza. Then Nutsu was caught by Tein Mha Mern. He took Nutsu to his office ‘TM office’. He told something to Nutsu “Ha Hah! Nutsuya, you are the pity one I have known. You know? Jang Hao sold you to me. He bored you. Ha Hah! Oh, did you know? Last 3 months, your parent’s company became insolvent and they sold you to Jang Hao. So now, he sold you to me. Ha Hah! No one give you the sincerity. Ha Hah!” said Tein Mha Mern. Nutsu was in speechless action. He was so sad and disappointed. ‘No one love me with pure heart’ he thought and started crying. “No one loves me. Jang Hao lied to me. He never love me” he said while he was crying “I want to die” he said “You want to? Ok. I will supply you” said Tein Mha Mern. Then he gave Nutsu a gun. “Let’s do it” he said. Nutsu held a gun in his hand. While he was going to shoot, there was a man pulled a gun out of his hand. “Jang Hao!!!” Nutsu shouted. He was frightened that Jang Hao was here. After helped Nutsu, Jang Hao told his bodyguards to escort Nutsu and continued fought with Tein Mha Mern. ‘Bang! Bang! Bang!’ There was a loud noise of gun and Tein Mha Mern’s body fell down. He died. Jang Hao walked to Nutsu and gave him a hug. “Nutsu Kun…I miss you. I’m sorry, I came almost late. Are you ok? Nutsu Kun, listen to me now. I didn’t sell you to Tein Mha Mern. He was lied you. He’s my enemy. He wants to destroy me by separate you from me because he knows that I can’t live without you” Jang Hao said. “Ja…Jang Hao. I love you. Sorry for those I do. I believed Tein Mha Mern. But now I know the truth” said Nutsu. “I know boy, I know. I love you too. Hey! For your family, they didn’t sell you to me. They were cheated by Tein Mha Mern’s subordinate. You know? Our matter is destiny. I’m sure” said Jang Hao. “I got it Jang Hao, I got it. Can I require you something?” Nutsu asked. “Sure, I can give you everything you want. Even my life” said Jang Hao. “Thanks, my love. I want to go back to Japan. I miss my parents. Can you take me there?” Nutsu asked Jang Hao. “Sure, we will go there tomorrow if you want” said Jang Hao. Next day, they were at Nutsu’s house in Japan. Nutsu went to say sorry to his parents. Sorry for made them worried about him. And for that he thought they sold him to Jang Hao. Finally, Jang Hao helped Nutsu’s company and went back to Hong Kong. He got married with Nutsu and spent their life together forever.

i have corrected many of your grammer.I hope its right since i'm not as much fluent.so if there is any mistakes made from me, you may please forgive,, ok.. 

This is a story of  a 21 year old boy named, Nutsuya Asachi. Last year, he had an exciting situation which changed his life. Nutsu was a student of Toki University and lived with his parents. He had no sibling. One day after studying, while he was going back home,some strangers came and applied chloroform to him. Then Nutsu became unconscious. Nutsu woke up in the morning and felt dizzy because of chloroform. ‘Where am i?’ It was the first question he thought of. Suddenly, the strangers who kidnapped him woke up and kept hold of him to keep walking. They also bound him the rope. “Hey! Who are you? Ah…And what do you want from me? Where is thi…” he asked. “Shut up!!” one of them yelled. “Ha Hah!! Afraid? Boy, You are in Hong Kong. We're going to sell you as the gigolo. You have no choice boy” said the strangers. “Wha…What? Gigolo? No! Please, leave me. I will give you money. Take me back to home please” Nutsu begged them. “Ha Hah!! Sorry, we can’t. We know you and your family have no money now. Ha Hah!” one of them said. “My family? Why? What happen?” Nutsu asked them to“Shut up!!” they shouted at him. Suddenly, there were two men in black suit walked up to them. They talked to the strangers near him so silently. Those men came to take him to the building named ‘Yarkz Harem’. They went to the top floor of the building at ‘President Room’. Inside that room, Nutsu saw a man in a black suit with glasses and he was sitting on a big chair and looking at him. That man was very handsome and seems calm. ”What’s your name?” asked the man “Na…Nutsu, Nutsuya Asachi” Nutsu answer him. “Um…Nutsu. I’m Jang Hao. I’m Yarkz Harem’s owner. Nice to meet you” Jang Hao said and shook hands with Nutsu. Nutsu didn’t know what was in his mind when he met Jang Hao. Jang Hao seems calm but when he looked in his eyes, he found the kindness, he felt warm. He didn’t feel afraid like he fell for the strangers. “You are cute” said Jang Hao. Nutsu was excited when Jang Hao walked closed to him and said he was cute! “I think I’m falling in love…with you” Jang Hao whispered to him. Nutsu was frightened with the sentence. After that Jang Hao persuaded Nutsu to live with him. Nutsu lived with Jang Hao for 3 months. He also fell in love with him. Because of affection and attention,  Jang Hao paid to him. One day, Jang Hao and Nutsu went to shopping at XP Plaza. Then Nutsu was caught by Tein Mha Mern. He took Nutsu to his office named ‘TM office’. He told something to Nutsu “Ha Hah! Nutsuya, you are the pity one,which I know. You know? Jang Hao sold you to me. He was bored of you. Ha Hah! Oh, did you know? Last 3 months, your parent’s company became insolvent and they sold you to Jang Hao. So now, he sold you to me. Ha Hah! No one, showed you any sincerity. Ha Hah!” said Tein Mha Mern. Nutsu was in frutrated. He was so sad and disappointed. ‘No one love me with pure heart’ , he thought and started crying. “No one loves me. Jang Hao lied to me. He never love me” he said while he was crying ,“I want to die” he said “You want to? Ok. I will supply you” said Tein Mha Mern. Then he gave Nutsu a gun. “Let’s do it” he said. Nutsu held a gun in his hand. While he was going to shoot, there was a man, pulled a gun out of his hand. “Jang Hao!!!” Nutsu shouted. He was frightened that Jang Hao was here. After helping Nutsu, Jang Hao told his bodyguards to escort Nutsu and he continued fighting with Tein Mha Mern. ‘Bang! Bang! Bang!’ There was a loud noise of gun and Tein Mha Mern died. He died. Jang Hao walked to Nutsu and gave him a hug. “Nutsu Kun…I miss you. I’m sorry, I came almost late. Are you ok? Nutsu Kun, listen to me now. I didn’t sell you to Tein Mha Mern. He lied to you. He’s my enemy. He wants to destroy me by separating you from me because he knew that I can’t live without you” Jang Hao said. “Ja…Jang Hao. I love you. Sorry for those I did. I believed Tein Mha Mern. But now I know the truth” said Nutsu. “I know boy, I know. I love you too. Hey! For your family, they didn’t sell you to me. They were cheated by Tein Mha Mern’s subordinate. You know? Our matter is destiny. I’m sure” said Jang Hao. “I got it Jang Hao, I got it. Can I require you something?” Nutsu asked. “Sure, I can give you everything you want. Even my life” said Jang Hao. “Thanks, my love. I want to go back to Japan. I miss my parents. Can you take me there?” Nutsu asked Jang Hao. “Sure, we will go there tomorrow if you want” said Jang Hao. Next day, they were at Nutsu’s house in Japan. Nutsu went to say sorry to his parents. Sorry for the worries he caused because of his missing. And for that he thought they sold him to Jang Hao. Finally, Jang Hao helped Nutsu’s company and went back to Hong Kong. He got married with Nutsu and spent their life together forever.

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