Could someone help me with my Chinese, please?

Hello!

 Could someone help me with these Chinese sentences I wrote? I am wondering if any of them are incorrect. Any help would be really, really appreciated!

 Lesson 33 Things/Something. [finished 3/26/08]

陈 先生 想 喝 东西。Mr. Chen would like to drink something.
陈 先生 想 喝 一点 东西。Mr. Chen would like to drink a little something.
她 想 喝 东西。He would like to drink something.
她 想 喝 一点 东西。She would like to drink a little something.
我 想 喝 东西。I would like to drink something.
杨 先生 想 喝 东西。Mr. Yang would like to drink something.
我 想 喝 一点 东西。I would like to drink a little something.
郑 先生 想 吃 东西。Mr. Zheng would like to eat something.
我 想 吃 一点 东西。I would like to eat a little something.
王 小姐 不 想 吃 东西。Ms. Wang would not like to eat anything.
这个 商店 有 很 多 东西 可以 买。This store has a lot of things you can buy.
那个 商店 有 很 多 东西 可以 买。That store has a lot of things you can buy.
这个 商店 没 很 多 东西 可以 买。This store does not have a lot of things you can buy.
我 要 去 商店 买 东西。I will go to the store to buy things.
她 要 去 商店 买 东西。She will go to the store to buy things.
我 不 想 买 东西。I don't want to buy anything.
他 学 东西 快。He learns things quickly.
学生们 学 东西 快。The students learn things quickly.
我的 学生们 学 东西 快。My students learn things quickly.
中国 学生们 学 东西 快。Chinese students learn things quickly.
郑 先生 学 东西 快。Mr. Zheng learns things quickly.

I can hlep u.

你的答案很正确，美中不足的是大部分翻译的过于直白，不够灵活。

i am pleasure to help you !haha

"wo bi ding cheng gong", I'll get it from you, that I just realize that the knowledge so wide, aljensen. you are include "xing yun de ren", lucky guy, who do never ending for knowledge. as arabian proverb: "uthlubul 'ilma walau bits tsiin", be reach knowledge although till china.  

Small-Q China,

真有你的，不過，現在還有人知道 圈閱 嗎？

能再度看到以往很熟悉的字眼，真高興。

hehe,seeing so much sentences with东西 ,i hardly know  what is the  mean of 东西 ?My English is poor,will u be my friend?

read more chinese book

especially the story about china

 i think it can improve your chinese  

your translation is right

it is a good beginning

try to translte it more freely

you can be better and better

if you would like we can be firends

i hope i can help you with your chinese

i also hope  your time stayiing in china will be happy eveyday

You are a excellent student.All the sentences are right.To continue, refueling.

I am improveing my English,you can feel that some of my English sentence does not smooth.So I have the same feel about your Chinese sentences as you.

fathma: Really? 圈阅 is still a very commonly-seen word on many Chinese forums. i think they are the same meaning.

现在还有很多人用圈阅的…我经常看到..