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I wrote this story wishing I have no mistakes

please read it and tell me what do u think?

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The Little Charley Holmes

ONCE UPON A TIME.THERE WAS A BOY CALLED" CHARLEY" .HE WAS KNOWN AS THE LITTLE CHARLEY HOLMES BECAUSE HE WAS SO SMART." CHARLEY" SOLVED MANY CASES LIKE THE MISSING GOAT AND THE STOLEN WALLET. IN A DARK AND STORMY NIGHT," CHARLEY" WAS ABOUT TO GO TO BED WHEN HE HEARD A TAPPING SOUND ON HIS WINDOW" TICK TICK TICK. "WHO'S THERE?"HE SHOUTED. SUDDENLY THERE WAS A FLASH OF LIGHTNING, HE SAW A FACE AT THE WINDOW. IT LOOKED LIKE AN ALIEN…AN ALIEN THAT HE HAD SEEN ON THE TELEVISION SHOW,"THE X FILES". HE FELT VERY SCARED.HE RAN TO HIS BED AND PULLED HIS BLANKET OVER HIS HEAD. HE STARTED TO SHOUT FOR HIS PARENTS BUT THERE WAS NO REPLY.HE PEEPED OUT OF HIS BLANKET BUT IT WAS TOO DARK TO SEE ANYTHING. THEN HE HEARD FOOTSTEPS. THEY WERE GETTING LOUDER AND LOUDER. IT WAS DARK BUT HE KNEW THE WAY TO THE DRAWER WHERE HE KEPT HIS TORCH. HE WALKED TO THE DOOR AND OPENED IT.HE SAW THE BACK OF AN ALIEN!" CHARLEY" FREAKED OUT AND HE DROPPED THE TORCH.THE ALIEN HEARD A NOISE, HE TURNED HIS HEAD AND "CHARLEY" RUSHED TO HIS BED AND PRETENDED SLEEPING. THE ALIEN ENTERED CHARLEY'S ROOM AND COVERED HIM WITH HIS BLANKET AND WENT OUT. CHARLEY THOUGHT THAT THE ALIEN WAS KIND BUT HIS MIND WAS FULL OF OTHER SCARY THOUGHTS.TIME PASSED…ONE O'CLOCK, TWO O'CLOCK, THREE O'CLOCK, and FOUR O'CLOCK. FINALLY, HE FELL ASLEEP.HE WOKE UP ONLY AFTER EIGHT AND DECIDED TO INVESTIGATE. HE FOUND SOME FOOTPRINTS OUTSIDE HIS BEDROOM WINDOW. HE MEASURED THEM WITH A TAPE AND FOUND THEM TO BE EXACTLY THE SAME SIZE AS HIS FATHER'S SHOES. THE FOOTPRINTS ENDED AT THE DOOR OF HIS PARENTS ROOM. THEN HE TOLD HIS FATHER THE WHOLE INCIDENT THEN HIS FATHER STARTED TO LAUGH. CHARLEY STARTED LAUGHING TOO WHEN HIS FATHER TOLD HIM THAT HE HAD DRESSED UP AS AN ALIEN FOR THE PARTY. TODAY HE IS STILL AMUSED TO THINK HE WAS SO AFRAID OF HIS OWN FATHER. THE END