Mumble and Jumble for soul !
Pakistan
November 23, 2009
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One little luscious floret,
Giggled disgustingly -
on a withering rose.
Nearby, Autumn screamed out:
you are next on my hit list row.
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November 20, 2009
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Caramel beloved ... well-done !
whatsoever you have done -
have to be done by someone! ...
No ruefulness, despite -
You fared all the fun.
Like an old miniature, i was shunned.
Salubrious; tormented heart, like a desert dune.
Mirror effulgent like a new polished sun.
No more an idolater of tempting semblance.
Matinee-idols effused of broken heart -
Now find none.
Rahman, The Supreme One manifested like never before.
Why to chafe after such a glorious won!
My Caramel beloved, well-done!
Due to you ... new Voyage begun ...
* Rahman, One of the name of G-d, which stands for the supreme infinite mercy.
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12:17 AM Nov 23 2009 |
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Saladeen |
The main theme here is that excessive adulation to beloved (naughty-cupid) lead us towards too much expectation from a person, like making him/her an idol for worship to attain our expectation and desires, but after making out all our worship, we realize that s/he is no more than a ordinary human being, and when we realized this thing somewhere in our lives, it shattered all our dreams and ultimately breaking our heart. Due to this breakage of heart, leads all those idols like individuals to flow out of broken heart (like the broken container can't hold anything) and when there is no more room for idols in the container of heart than it leads toward clear and clean polished heart, like new polished sun radiating warmness. The heart; without any expectation of any kind from anybody, shines the mirror to new level, where we find nothing but the supreme Creator Himself with full bloom and manifestation. Than the love for humanity is without any reward and punishment but only for the sake of unconditional love and respect. So, the person in this context could praise his/her beloved for the pains which are connected with relationship with him/her, because due to his/her pain and betrayal s/he find himself/herself on new level of understanding and reality and thus new journey of realization begins ...... henceforth, in the form of new Voyage....
Although, the poem can be interpreted on so many other levels but this was the actual theme on my mind while constructing this poem...
.................................................................... This poem is specifically constructed while having your mentioned 'naughty-cupids' in my mind ....
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02:43 AM Nov 21 2009 |
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02:35 AM Nov 21 2009 |
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Saladeen |
Not in the category of wonders yet... just an immature attempt...only a naive can construct such poems; either too simple or too complicated .... |
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02:07 AM Nov 21 2009 |
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CranBerry |
Who is the author of that tremendously complicated and intricately astounding sweet wonder?
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November 20, 2009
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Mirrors never look the same way twice nor the same to any two people.
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02:16 AM Nov 21 2009 |
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CranBerry |
"curiouser and curiouser" |
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11:01 PM Nov 20 2009 |
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Saladeen |
Wow, you have guessed the correct perspective of mentioned aphorism. Actually, now-a-days, i am playing video game under the name of " Alice in the Bombard-land" and upon the completion of each level of game, they reward you with one power thought from " Alice in The wonderland ". The mentioned thought is one of the reward from one of the level completion... |
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08:00 AM Nov 20 2009 |
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CranBerry |
The mirror reality is unstable and versatile structure and it's for good as we never know whom we see in the mirror when we wake up in the morning.Maybe we can find ourselves in the Mirror land like Alice and then all the adventures are ready to be discovered. That's why when it is necessary to change the life we should begin with ... a man watching us from the mirror.
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