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darknesskid

Japan

December 7, 2009

If you are OK, please correct my sentence after this my blog.

 

I run with my friend because recently my physical energ is down.

When I was 12, I was fat.My body become fat easily.

I have played soccer because I didn't want to become fat.

I want to continue to play sports, and that's why I don't wnat to return previously.

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05:13 AM Dec 13 2009

darknesskid
Japan

 Thanks !!

12:04 AM Dec 09 2009

shashushi181
Viet Nam

This is my correction. Maybe it's not right all but i hope it can help.

Today, i got a run with my friend because i felt that my strength has gone down recently. I used to be fat when i was 12. Actually, i'm very easy to be fat so that i have had to play soccer to stay on shape. I don't wanna back to the previous time.

01:01 AM Dec 08 2009

panpanzhou
China

 Go on! support you!