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# Rule No. 1:

Whenever you start any new sentence the first letter of the first word must be CAPITAL.

# Rule No. 2:

"I" which we use when we  say "I am" must be CAPITAL all the time, even if it wasn't in the beginning of the sentence.

# Rule No. 3:

Names of cities, countries, people etc ... we always write the first letter of them CAPITAL. For example: Hong Kong.

# Rule No. 4:

We use "Have" with: I, You, They and We.

We use "Has" with: He, She and It.

i meet you that i feel deligtful

-         After Correction:

First of all, I like Hong Kong because Hong Kong is an international city. Hong Kong has a lot of different clothing, fashion and food. In Hong Kong I can buy different clothing. I feel very delightful.

Second, if you went to Hong Kong, you will find in Hong Kong a lot of different food. For example: Chinese food, Japanese food and American food. The food is not expensive. You can try different foods. I think you will like to visit Hong Kong. I like Hong Kong's freed, because I can speak up my idea. I feel free. I enjoy saying my idea.

Hong Kong has a new mail system. I can receive messages very easy. I don't like fashion because it's very expensive.

All in all, I like Hong Kong.

-         Before Correction:

 first of all, i like hong kong beacuse hong kong is international city ,hong kong have more difference the clothing , fashion , food . i can in hong kong to buy difference clothing . i feel very delightful .

second ,if you went to hongkong ,you will found hong kong more difference food .for example; chnia food ,japanise food , usa food . the food is not expensive . you try to difference food . i think you like to hong kong . i like hong kong the freed, because i can speak up my idea . i feel freed.i have enjoy to say my idea.

hong kong have new massage .i can receive massage very easy . i unlike fashion because about fashion massage very expensive.

all in all, i like hong kong .

I've corrected the things which I know .. I hope it benefits you
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